Constructive criticism

As a group we have made a list of what we believe we could improve in our video, and also what we have been advised to improve from feedback.

Storyline needing to be clearer

- Certain settings seem to be random

- Park= NO

- Taylor swift- watch it, similarities

- Hug on road is awkward

- Vaseline edged clips

- Park scenes

- Red dress= NO, does not suit setting

- Always the same hand gestures

- Add another possible spin?

- Not smile during last spin

- Editting and effects

- Re-do some shots to look more realistic

- A lot going on

-Sleep scene is too long

-Relationship dying?

-Shoes with legs would look better

We are making small tweaks to our video and this has helped to prioritize what needs to be done. By doing this I've learnt that not all first ideas are the best ones and that although they may seem good at the time, they need to be practiced and edited to get the full effect, which sometimes isn't the one we were hoping to achieve.